some people say that the main enviromental problem of our time is the loss of partivcular species of plants and animlas. others say that there are more important enviromental problmes discuss both these views and give your opinion
While
some people believe that special plant and animal extinction is the prominent environmental issue we confort
today, others claim that there are more vital reasons causing environmental problems. Correct your spelling
confront
comfort
This
essay will explore both perspectives and explain why I believe that some other reasons threaten a pleasant environment
.
On the one hand, biodiversity is a critical point to have a well-balanced ecosystem. It means that special plants and animals should be protected against dangers which make them become extinct. Since the imbalanced ecosystem damages other species' life
Fix the agreement mistake
lives
due to
the natural cycle . For example
, the life
of all sea animals are threatened if Fix the agreement mistake
lives
under
sea plants Change preposition
apply
such
as coral die out.
On the other hand
, emission
of harmful gases is rapidly destroying the earth’s atmosphere, causing unpredictable climate conditions. Correct article usage
the emission
In other words
, man-made emerging disasters such
as unlimited usage of energy, unawareness of maintaining the urban environment
and eliminating
Replace the word
elimination
forests
cause global warming which could change Change preposition
of forests
weather
patterns. However
, preserving weather
temperature so that it does not rise is so
critical to have a pleasant Rephrase
apply
environment
. For instance
, research conducted in Iran last
year explored that pollution arising from gases produced by factories is the main reason for warming weather
and destroying the planet's habitat.
In conclusion, although
both viewpoints, the vital role of some species plants
and animals on Change preposition
of plants
environment
and other problems, have their own merits, I believe that rising weather
as a cause of emission gases like carbon dioxide and other manual damages is the main cause of having an unfavourable environment
which should be mitigated with high priority.Submitted by TUTOO on
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task response
Ensure that the essay addresses all aspects of the prompt, discusses both views in detail, and provides a clear opinion.
coherence cohesion
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lexial resource
Expand your range of vocabulary and collocations to improve the overall lexical resource.
grammatical range
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