There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the transport company. In your letter -describe the problems -explain how these problems are affecting the public -suggest some changes that could be made.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter regarding the recent issues I have with Trans Metro Bandung
due to
many problems with the
bus
idling. I am Hendra a permanent resident of Mekarwangi Square. The major problem of Trans Metro Bandung in my area is that the
bus
idling around the corner of a traffic light near Purbaleunyi Toll Gate. Sometimes that creates a traffic problem around the corner area, and it can take half hour for the
bus
to move.
On the contrary
,
passengers
want to sit and relax rather than get hassled
with
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the congestion and horn sounds. Other than that, the
bus
kept
caught
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speeding when it was nighttime and deserted roads. It can dangered the
passengers
,
also
other road users.
Bus
drivers are thinking more about chasing deposits, regardless of safety. To resolve
this
issue, I highly recommend selectively choosing a driver with the best service,
that
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passengers
can sit happily.
Additionally
,
government
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needs to pay a monthly deposit, rather than collecting money from
passengers
, resulting
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in driversthinking
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driversthinking
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drivers thinking
more about safety. Thank you and Regards
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task response
Address all parts of the task fully and provide a complete response.
coherence and cohesion
Organize the letter into clear paragraphs with each paragraph having a central topic.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to express ideas more precisely and use language that is suitable in a formal letter.
grammatical range
Use a variety of sentence structures with accurate use of grammar and punctuation.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plaguing
  • delays
  • frustration
  • inconvenience
  • productivity
  • rely on
  • daily commute
  • overall
  • condition
  • deteriorated
  • overcrowded
  • seating arrangements
  • compromises
  • safety
  • comfort
  • impacts
  • hygienic
  • maintenance
  • unpleasant
  • alternative
  • modes of transportation
  • congestion
  • pollution
  • fuel consumption
  • proposed
  • infrastructure
  • upgrading
  • expanding
  • cater to
  • growing population
  • focus on
  • regular maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • hire
  • train
  • customer service
  • overcrowding
  • expectations
  • managing
  • minimizing
  • appropriate action
  • reliable
  • efficient
  • sustainable
  • benefits
  • entire community
  • Thank you for your attention to this matter.
  • Yours faithfully
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