The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
The bar chart describes why adults go into
education
and the pie chart shows who the respondents think should pay for it.
People
mostly go into
education
out of interest, and, perhaps unsurprisingly,it is believed that they should pay for it themselves.
According to
the data, forty
percent
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of adults go into
education
due to
some sort of interest in
aparticular
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a particular
subject,
while
thirty-eight
percent
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per cent
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do it to gain qualifications. These are far and away the most common reasons, as the next most frequently cited reason was almost half
this
value. Several reasons were picked by about twenty
percent
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of
people
, including the fact that it may help them earn a promotion at work. The least frequently stated answer was that adult
education
is a good way to meet new
people
. The survey results showed forty
percent
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of
people
believe the individual should pay the costs of a course.
This
matches quite well with the previous data, as the same percentage of
people
did these courses purely out of interest.
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