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The table below shows the number of cars made in Argentina, Australia, and Thailand from 2003 to 2009.

The table below shows the number of cars made in Argentina, Australia, and Thailand from 2003 to 2009.
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The table gives information about the vehicles being made in three different countries, namely
Argentina
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, Australia, and Thailand, between 2003-2009.
Overall
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, the highest amount of cars was made in Thailand throughout the period but at the initial stage,
Argentina
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 produced the least
number
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whereas
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 the figure decreased in Australia in the final
year
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.
Argentina
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 was showing an upward trend throughout.
To begin
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 with,
Argentina
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 contained about 235,088 cars in the
year
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 2003 and
this
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number
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 increased in the
year
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 2005 and reached 352,759 in the
last
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year
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that is
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 in 2009 it doubled in
number
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 that was 466,089.
Whereas
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, in the case of Thailand, the ratio was high at the beginning of the first
year
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 in 2003 and the numbers of transport were 735,852 and it became three times more in the
year
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 2005 which was 1,162,356 and in the
last
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year
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 their
number
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 fell and reached about 999,963. On the flipside, in Australia the
number
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 of automobiles showed decreased throughout as shown in tabel in the start the figure was 452,163 and with time in the
year
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 2005, it was 341,268.
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, it reduced to half in the
last
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year
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 which was 245,6254. has context menu
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words argentina, number, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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