The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use.
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The diagrams illustrate the average energy consumption of household appliances and proportions of the earth heating gases of households in Australia.
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, the households which heat the house's inner space and
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, utilize the largest amount of power.
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, what is apparent in the figure is that domestic
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heating systems and other appliances produce a larger sum of air pollution in Australian houses. The three most significant energy users are heaters,
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heaters, and other facilities which
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are the main greenhouse gas producers as well.The biggest quantity of energy-acquiring devices belongs to heaters, and they share 42% of the entire energy use. The
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heating equipment ranking second is responsible for 40%,
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, the other devices comprise 15%. The gas emission chart particularly presents that 32%, 28%, and 15% of total heating gas release routes to
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heating, heating, and other purposes. The three minor power consumers are the chilling units, the lights, and the refrigerators which account for 2%, 4%, and 7%. Meanwhile, the named facilities are the least air-polluting households with 12%, 7%, and 5% percentages.
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