The line graph illustrates how much money was spent on watching films in 3 primary forms namely cinemas, DVDs and legal download as well as the percentage split among the three forms given in the pie charts.

The following line graph and pie chart provide

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data on the prices of

cinema

tickets , DVDs and legal downloads over the span of years and the difference

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their market shares in 2005 and 2011. Looking from an

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perspective, the cost

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the tickets

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cinema

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is higher than the other 2 sections throughout the years .

While

renting a DVD maintained its

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position, the indicators for legal downloads increased significantly in 2011. Delving into the details, the value of

cinema

tickets was over 8 dollars in 2005 and raised up to 14 dollars over the years.

However

, the figures for DVD and legal downloads were below 8 dollars and

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just

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over 8 in 2011. Shifting the focus to the second illustration, 64 per cent of

market

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share

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to the DVD segment in 2005 and again the proportions

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over 50

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cent in 2015. The percentages fell from 30 to18 for the

cinema

sector, representing a significant decrease.

Furthermore

, a 26 per cent surge is observed in the online film sector.