The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now
The provided maps give information about the public garden transformation from 1980 until the present day.
Overall
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, it is evident that the
park
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experienced a majority of changes over the given period, and became a suitable place for both the elderly and young. In 1980, the
park
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had two gates as entrances which have been removed.
Following
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this
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, pathways have been changed into four different walkways. As can be seen, in 1980, the left-hand of the
park
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included flowers, a pond, and benches but in comparison to the current day, everything is almost the same except for the flowers which turned into bushes and the number of benches
have
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has
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increased. On the opposite side of the road, in the top right-hand corner of the
park
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, the area with trees has been changed into a place
that is
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appropriate for having a barbecue, and some chairs and desks have been added.
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, the big flower area at the right-hand side of the
park
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had changed into a playground for children.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformed
  • expanded
  • renovated
  • upgraded
  • revamped
  • refurbished
  • install
  • addition
  • increase
  • enhance
  • improve
  • introduce
  • upgrade
  • create
  • development
  • facilities
  • recreational areas
  • wildlife habitats
  • pathways
  • walkways
  • seating areas
  • lighting arrangements
  • ponds
  • lakes
  • sports facilities
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