The charts below give information about the people use public library and the main reasons to visit in BritIain in 1991 and 2000

The charts below give information about the people use public library and the main reasons to visit in BritIain in 1991 and 2000
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The bar chart illustrates the data on
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the people
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pubplic
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public
libarary
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libraries
and the main reasons to
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Britan
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Britain
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from 1991 to 2000. They are measured by percentage.
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, it can be clearly seen that the
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proportion
of borrow or
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return
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book
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books
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read
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newspaper
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and
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and
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studies
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saw a downward trend,
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infomation
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information
.
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that, the figure for borrow or
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book
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books
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was the highest in both
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and borrow or
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in 2000. Now turning to the main details. In 1991, the percentage of read
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or
magazine
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magazines
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was 15%. Meanwhile, the figure for
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or
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book
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books
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was 65%. The data on
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study
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was 10% and
obtian
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obtain
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had
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same
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proportion
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.
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After
9 years, both the percentages of
study
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and read
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or
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magazines
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witnessed
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drop to 2% and 5%. The figure for borrow or
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book
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experienced
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decrease to 59%. Meanwhile,
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obtain
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had an opposite trend with each other at double
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proportion
promotion
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finally
,
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or
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new and occupied at 18%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words return, book, study with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • data comparison
  • trends
  • usage patterns
  • visitors
  • accessibility
  • information resources
  • traditional libraries
  • online resources
  • technological advancements
  • community support
  • promoting literacy
  • educational resources
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