The charts below give information about the people use public library and the main reasons to visit in BritIain in 1991 and 2000

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libraries

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from 1991 to 2000. They are measured by percentage.

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of borrow or

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saw a downward trend,

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that, the figure for borrow or

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book

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was the highest in both

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and borrow or

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videos just

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in 2000. Now turning to the main details. In 1991, the percentage of read

newspaper

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magazine

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was 15%. Meanwhile, the figure for

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book

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was 65%. The data on

study

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was 10% and

obtian

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had

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9 years, both the percentages of

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witnessed

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drop to 2% and 5%. The figure for borrow or

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experienced

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decrease to 59%. Meanwhile,

obtian

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had an opposite trend with each other at double

propotion

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promotion

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new and occupied at 18%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words return, book, study with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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The charts below give information about the people use public library and the main reasons to visit in BritIain in 1991 and 2000

Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents are better caregivers for their young children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Band 7 University should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?