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You have a friend who lives in a city abroad . You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in the city . Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him or her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the last few years . Ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.

#friend #lives #city #course #colleges #type #work #studies #years #assistance #institution
Dear jass I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
 letter
inform
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to inform
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 you that
i
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I
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 want to apply to do a course at one of the
colllleges
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colleges
 in your
city
 You already know
about
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apply
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that
i
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I
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 have completed graduation in arts and
i
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I
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 did
bachelor
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a bachelor
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 of education
in
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apply
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last
 year. I decided to take admission
in
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to
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master
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the master
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 of education in
you
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your
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city
 . Can you tell me if you know about the best college
of
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in
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 your
city
 for M.ed
.
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?
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 Because
i
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I
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dont
Correct your spelling
don't
 know about college for your
city
. If you help me
for
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to
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 find out college
i
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I
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 will
very
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be very
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 thankful
you
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to you
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. Your loving , Sumandeep
kaur
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Kaur
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coherence cohesion
The letter is lacking in clarity and coherence. It does not fully address the task and the tone is not suitable for a formal letter.
task response
The letter does not fully respond to the task. It lacks specific details and does not effectively communicate the writer's purpose.
lexical resource
The writer's choice of vocabulary is quite informal and lacks variety. There are also several spelling and grammar errors that affect the overall lexical resource.
grammatical range
There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, and the sentence structures are quite basic. The writer needs to work on using a wider range of grammatical structures and producing error-free sentences.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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