You have a friend who lives in a city abroad . You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in the city . Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him or her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the last few years . Ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.
Dear jass
I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter inform
you that Fix the infinitive
to inform
i
want to apply to do a course at one of the Change the capitalization
I
colllleges
in your Correct your spelling
colleges
city
You already know about
that Change preposition
apply
i
have completed graduation in arts and Change the capitalization
I
i
did Change the capitalization
I
bachelor
of educationCorrect article usage
a bachelor
in
Change preposition
apply
last
year. I decided to take admission in
Change preposition
to
master
of education in Correct article usage
the master
you
Change the pronoun
your
city
.
Can you tell me if you know about the best college of
your Change preposition
in
city
for M.ed.
Because Change the punctuation
?
i
Change the capitalization
I
dont
know about college for your Correct your spelling
don't
city
. If you help me for
find out college Change preposition
to
i
will Change the capitalization
I
very
thankful Add a missing verb
be very
you
.
Your loving ,
Sumandeep Change preposition
to you
kaur
Change the capitalization
Kaur
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coherence cohesion
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task response
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lexical resource
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grammatical range
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The Closing
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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,