In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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books
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sanctification
books
. Reading printed books
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to
people
. They can smell the books
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books
, can make a note in the books
. By reading online books
. they cannot reach the joyful sensation as printed book
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Moreveover
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, there are Correct your spelling
experience
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a limited
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books
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and
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people
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of people
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especially Fix the agreement mistake
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elderly
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the elderly
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their lack of knowledge of technology, they will still prefer printed newspaper
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people
usually must read in bigger fonts that cannot provided by online newspaper
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the higher
people
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from
books
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite