In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the coming decade, it is argued that no one will buy printed
books
and
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because they are available online and free.
However
, in my point of view,
although
there are many
books
that will
available
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online without paying,
but
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it
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they
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cannot beat the
satistification
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sanctification
of reading printed
books
. Reading printed
books
can bring happiness
for
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some
people
. They can smell the
books
,
can
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hear the
sound
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when they flip the pages of the
books
, can make a note in the
books
. By reading online
books
. they cannot reach the joyful sensation as printed
book
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books
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.
Moreveover
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Moreover
, based on my
expericence
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experience
, there are
limited
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genre
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genres
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of
books
that you can read online
or
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and
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the edition of
books
is not up to date. Printed
books
posses
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possess
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many
genre
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of
books
that we can buy and choose and the newest edition
always
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available in
bookstore
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bookstores
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or online
store
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stores
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. Online
books
possess other drawbacks
such
as not
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being availailable
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availailable
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available
in every country, sometimes
it
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apply
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only available in one country. In my point of view, there are a lot
people
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of people
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who will still buy printed
newspaper
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especially
elderly
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the elderly
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.
Due to
their lack of knowledge of technology, they will still prefer printed
newspaper
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newspapers
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although
they should
it
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apply
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pay
it
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apply
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more. Elderly
people
usually must read in bigger fonts that cannot provided by online
newspaper
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newspapers
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. In conclusion,
higher
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the higher
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price that
people
should pay for
books
will not stop them
for
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from
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buying
books
. Because of it's sensational feeling that they cannot get from online
books
.
In addition
,
elderly
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the elderly
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often read
books
in larger fonts.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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