You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter, •say which part-time course you booked • explain why you need to cancel your booking • ask about booking a different course

Dear Sir, I hope you are doing great. My name is Lovejit Singh, and a student in the Project Management course at your college. I am writing
letter to let you know that I booked a part-time course in electronics for the summer session which I want to change because of some reasons.
, I am working part-time at Walmart Grocery store during my studies as I have to manage my own expenses. As you know, I enrolled on a program which starts in the summer but my supervisor told me that my working hours should be transferred to full-time after two months because there will be a shortage of workers during peak time. I
need money as I have to support my family in India.
, I request you to cancel my booking for the diploma in Electronics as I am unable to manage my schedule.
, if it is possible, I can take another course during the evening time. Please tell me about Cloud Computing and I want to enrol in the same. I am waiting for your response. Yours faithfully, LS
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