THE FOREST AND THE NEED TO PRESERVE IT. WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THAT?

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Plants

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are

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like our heart, we can not

breath

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without

plant

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the plant

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Forest

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is where we can see

bio diversity

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biodiversity

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, different

kind

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plant

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plants

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and

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live there and it will help to balance our

eco system

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ecosystem

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. Without

trees

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human

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can not

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can not survise any

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survise

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survive

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no longer. We all have

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resonsiblity

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forests. I totally agree with

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statement and I will explain the reasons for that

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further

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. Mainly, the

forest

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will provide various benefits for us. Specially, it is a home for

diferrent

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spieces

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species

and

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. Our

eco system

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ecosystem

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is balance

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because of

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floral

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and fauna, If it

is unbalance

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we can not live in

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world so far.

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mainly help for providing oxygen and inhealing CO2. If

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process

not

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work properly all

animals

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and humans will not survive in future. Nowadays many climate changes we can see

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as flood, drought, high

temprature

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temperature

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, it is

directly

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cause

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deforestration.

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Novermber

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southern side of Sri Lanka does not have rain for 5 months. All people

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suffer

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temprature

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temperature

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and drought. Famers all crops destroyed without water.

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, after destroying

forest

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wild

animals

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do not have their safe places. They will come to cities and they will search

food

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place

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live.

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will be a thread for

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people

because there may be dangerous wild

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tiger

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lion

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and

bear

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this

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, most of the

animals

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will become

extinics

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extinct

soon. In conclusion, everyone

have

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responsiblity

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responsibility

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save

others

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life so, when we cut down trees in the

forest

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will

thread

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threat

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for

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every single life in

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world.

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, we want to preserve forests for the future and it gives

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lot of benefits for people.

Plants

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animals

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and humans

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all are part of the world without one part we can not

survice

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survive

service

in future.

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coherence cohesion

The essay lacks coherence and cohesion, with the logical structure being weak. It also needs better introduction and conclusion.

task achievement

The essay partially responds to the task, but the response lacks depth and clarity. It includes relevant points but needs more comprehensive development.

lexical resource

The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary and lacks precision and variety in expressing ideas. It needs improvement in lexical resource.

grammatical range

The essay demonstrates a limited control of grammar, resulting in frequent errors in sentence structure and word choice. It needs to improve grammatical range and accuracy.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

312 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
deforestation
carbon sequestration
sustainable forest management
ecosystem
climate regulation
habitat preservation
renewable resources
environmental balance
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THE FOREST AND THE NEED TO PRESERVE IT. WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THAT?

Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures should be taken to reduce this pressure?

Nowadays more and more people want things instantly(eg: goods, service, news).Why is this? It is a positive or negative development?

ome people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others belive that some imformation is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Planting trees if very important, some people say that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of the cities and town, while others say that housing facilities should be build instead. Do you agree or disagree?