THE FOREST AND THE NEED TO PRESERVE IT. WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THAT?

Plants
is
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like our heart, we can not
breath
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without
plant
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the plant
a plant
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.
Forest
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is where we can see
bio diversity
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biodiversity
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, different
kind
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kinds
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of
plant
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plants
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and
animal
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animals
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live there and it will help to balance our
eco system
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ecosystem
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. Without
trees
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trees,
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human
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humans
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can not
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can not survise any
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survise
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survive
service
no longer. We all have
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a resonsiblity
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resonsiblity
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responsibility
to protect the
remain
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forests. I totally agree with
this
statement and I will explain the reasons for that
in
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further
. Mainly, the
forest
will provide various benefits for us. Specially, it is a home for
diferrent
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different
spieces
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species
and
plants
. Our
eco system
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ecosystem
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is balance
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is balanced
is balancing
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because of
this
floral
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and fauna, If it
is unbalance
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is unbalanced
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we can not live in
this
world so far.
Plants
mainly help for providing oxygen and inhealing CO2. If
this
process
not
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does not
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work properly all
animals
and humans will not survive in future. Nowadays many climate changes we can see
such
as flood, drought, high
temprature
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temperature
temperatures
, it is
directly
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cause
for
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deforestration.
For example
, from
last
Novermber
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November
southern side of Sri Lanka does not have rain for 5 months. All people
sufer
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suffer
from high
temprature
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temperature
temperatures
and drought. Famers all crops destroyed without water.
On the other hand
, after destroying
forest
wild
animals
do not have their safe places. They will come to cities and they will search
food
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for food
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and
place
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a place
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for
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live.
This
will be a thread for
pleople
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people
because there may be dangerous wild
animal
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animals
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like
tiger
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tigers
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,
lion
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lions
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and
bear
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bears
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.
As a result
of
this
, most of the
animals
will become
extinics
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extinct
soon. In conclusion, everyone
have
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the responsiblity
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responsiblity
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responsibility
for
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save
others
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life so, when we cut down trees in the
forest
will
thread
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threat
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for
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every single life in
this
world.
Therefore
, we want to preserve forests for the future and it gives
s
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a
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lot of benefits for people.
Plants
,
animals
and humans
we
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apply
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all are part of the world without one part we can not
survice
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survive
service
in future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • deforestation
  • carbon sequestration
  • sustainable forest management
  • ecosystem
  • climate regulation
  • habitat preservation
  • renewable resources
  • environmental balance
  • conservation
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