The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate a public library's floor
plane
two decades ago and now. Correct your spelling
plan
Overall
, tables, chairs and
enquiry deck and other old places was removed, and replaced by Correct word choice
apply
cafe
, Add an article
the cafe
a cafe
computer
room
and self-service machines these kind of modern designed area
.
First,
20 years ago, the library had tables and chairs in the center
with adult Change the spelling
centre
fiction
books
on its left and adult non-fiction
books
on its
right. A place for CDs, videos and Change the word
the
computer
games were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
on
the top-left Change preposition
in
corner
; area
for children's Correct article usage
an area
books
were
Change the verb form
was
on
the top-right Change preposition
in
corner
; reading
Correct article usage
the reading
room
. The entrance was on
the Change preposition
at
bottom-center
of the library, and Change the spelling
bottom-centre
reading
Correct article usage
the reading
room
with newspapers and magazines was on
the bottom-left Change preposition
in
corner
, Moreover
, there was a
enquiry desk Change the article
an
on
the bottom-right Change preposition
in
corner
.
Nowadays, tables and chairs was
removed. Adult Wrong verb form
are
fiction
books
were replaced by all reference books
, and old
Correct article usage
the old
area
for adut
Correct your spelling
adult
fiction
added an information desk and self-service machines. Area
for CDs, videos, Correct article usage
The area
computer
games Correct word choice
and computer
was replace
by Change the verb form
was replaced
a
Change the article
an
area
with children's fiction
books
, sofas and a plce
for Correct your spelling
place
story telling
events. Correct your spelling
storytelling
Area
originally for children's Add an article
The area
An area
books
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
bacame
Correct your spelling
became
lecture
Correct article usage
a lecture
room
, and reading
Correct article usage
the reading
room
was replaced by computer
Correct article usage
a computer
room
. Lastly
, enquiry
deck was replaced by Correct article usage
the enquiry
cafe
.Add an article
the cafe
a cafe
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, room, area, fiction, books, corner with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
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