The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates how the
number
of shops that are opened and closed has changed in a country from 2011 to 2018.
In terms Use synonyms
the
Change preposition
of the
number
of Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
shop
Use synonyms
openings
, there was a plunge from 8000 in 2011 when the opening Use synonyms
number
reached the top to 4000 in 2012, before increasing to 6000 in 2014. Use synonyms
Then
the figure Linking Words
of
Change preposition
for
shop
Use synonyms
openings
witnessed another decrease, Use synonyms
until
3000 in 2018.
Contrasting the frequency of Change preposition
to
shop
Use synonyms
openings
, the quantity of Use synonyms
shop
closures displayed remarkable fluctuations. Use synonyms
Initially
remaining relatively stable at 6,500 between 2011 and 2014, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shop
closures notably decreased to 800 in 2015, followed by a significant increase to 5,000 in 2016. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, Linking Words
this
figure plateaued until 2018 when the Linking Words
number
of closed shops surpassed the Use synonyms
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
openings
by 2,000.
Use synonyms
Overall
, over the course of these eight years, both the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shop
closures and Use synonyms
openings
experienced a declining trend.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shop, openings with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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