The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates us manufacture of milk in the Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania and in Guatemala in 3 different
years
.
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Overall
, the lowest one in production was Guatemala and the highest one was the Netherlands.
Guatemala has risen more than 3 times from 26000 in 1990 to 84000 in 2010. Tanzania at that time, grew in the first 10 Linking Words
years
to 142000 and the next 10 Use synonyms
years
did not have big changes and counted only 155000. The only known country that decreased 2 times in a row, is Australia. Use synonyms
Firstly
, they accounted for 11246000 in 1990 and in the beginning they fell to 11105000. Linking Words
At the end
of 2010, they calculated 9165000 which is approximately glow dawn to 2000000 in 20 Linking Words
years
. The Netherlands slightly increased after dropping at the start. For 20 Use synonyms
years
they do not have big changes. Use synonyms
At the end
of 2010, they had the biggest fabrication of milk, compared with the other 4 countries, that count 11466000.Linking Words
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