Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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are arising day by day

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animals

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a debate. Some people argue that any type of experimentation on

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others believe that these

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have a variety of drawbacks.

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experiment has negative effects on these creaters

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they may improve it for another experiment.

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