Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

Scientific
experiments
are arising day by day
espacially
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especially
in the field of medicine.
However
,
experiments
of
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on
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animals
are nowadays
arising
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raising
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a debate. Some people argue that any type of experimentation on
animals
are
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considered to be bad,
while
others believe that these
experiments
are
cruicial
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crucial
for scientific discoveries. In
this
essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion. Looking at the first side of the
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, scientific
experiments
on
animals
have a variety of drawbacks.
Firstly
, these
experiments
have a big impact on
environment
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the environment
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. To be more precise, the affected
animals
are spreading
theose
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these
those
experimented chemicals in the
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surrounding
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and unclean or
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damage
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the environment.
Moreover
, more
animals
can
also
be affected
from
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these
experiments
.
For instance
,
an
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experiment
has
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done on an animal,
this
animal is either prey for another or predator, so in
this
case more and more
animals
are
affecting
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from
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that
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only one animal.
On the other hand
, humans are gaining
benefitis
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benefits
from these scientific
experimanets
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experiments
.
For example
,
a
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scientest
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scientist
discover
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a new drug, before using or supplying
to
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it to
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the market it is crucial to
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on something else before
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by humans.
Furthermore
,
scientests
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scientists
experimentation on
animals
can lead them to
improvemnet
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improvement
improvements
in the products. To be more exact, if
this
experiment has negative effects on these creaters
then
they may improve it for another experiment.
To sum up
, it is
cruicial
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crucial
for
scientests
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scientists
to experience their discoveries for
further
improvement but it has
greater
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a greater
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impact on
environment
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the environment
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and
animals
. In my
opinion
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opinion,
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scientests
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scientists
should continue their way of experimentation as there is no alternative way of
experiments
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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