Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
Scientific
experiments
are arising day by day Use synonyms
especially
in the field of medicine. Add the comma(s)
, especially
However
, Linking Words
experiments
on Use synonyms
animals
are nowadays raising a debate. Some people argue that any type of experimentation on Use synonyms
animals
is considered to be bad, Use synonyms
while
others believe that these Linking Words
experiments
are crucial for scientific discoveries. In Use synonyms
this
essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.
Looking at the first side of the argument, scientific Linking Words
experiments
on Use synonyms
animals
have a variety of drawbacks. Use synonyms
Firstly
, these Linking Words
experiments
have a big impact on the environment. To be more precise, the affected Use synonyms
animals
are spreading those experimented chemicals in the surroundings and unclean or damaging the environment. Use synonyms
Moreover
, more Linking Words
animals
can Use synonyms
also
be affected by these Linking Words
experiments
. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
scientists
have done an Use synonyms
experiment
on an animal, Use synonyms
this
animal is either prey for another or predator, so in Linking Words
this
case more and more Linking Words
animals
are affected by only one animal.
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On the other hand
, humans are gaining benefits from these scientific Linking Words
experiments
. Use synonyms
For example
,if Linking Words
ascientist
discovers a new drug, before using or supplying Correct your spelling
a scientist
scientist
to
the market it is crucial to Correct pronoun usage
it to
experiment
on something else before being used by humans. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
scientists
experimentation on Change noun form
scientists'
scientist's
animals
can lead them to improvements in the products. To be more exact, if Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
experiment
has negative effects on these creaters Use synonyms
then
they may improve it for another Linking Words
experiment
.
Use synonyms
To sum up
, it is crucial for Linking Words
scientists
to experience their discoveries for Use synonyms
further
improvement but it has a greater impact on the environment and Linking Words
animals
. In my opinion, Use synonyms
scientists
should continue their way of experimentation as there is no alternative way of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
experiments
.Wrong verb form
experimenting
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