IELTS Writing task 2: Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by private companies rather than governments. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Write an essay with at least 250 words

The question of whether scientific

research

should be conducted and controlled by private companies

instead

of governmental bureaus has sparked

a lively debates

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.

While

there are both advantages and disadvantages of privately-based studies, I contend that the disadvantages can surpass

its

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advantages. On the one hand,

this

can bring a benefit regarding the expense if scientific

research

is undertaken by private businesses. In fact, private corporations often possess substantial financial resources, enabling them to do

research

more efficiently and rapidly.

Moreover

, private funding can relieve the burden on government budgets, freeing up resources for other essential societal needs.

On the other hand

,

privately-funded

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scientific

research

may cause considerable concerns. First and foremost, the pursuit of profit may lead to a focus on

research

areas that promise immediate financial returns, potentially neglecting less profitable fields

but

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for social gains

such

as anthropology, geography, sociology or psychology.

Additionally

, private control may limit public access to

research

findings and lack a guarantee of

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quality. Proprietary interests could lead to limited accessibility potentially withholding significant breakthroughs from the wider scientific community.

Conversely

, government-funded

research

is more likely to prioritize open access, which enables researchers to give peer reviews and the quality of these studies can be scrutinized. In conclusion,

while

private companies' involvement in scientific

research

is cost-efficient, the potential drawbacks cannot be ignored.

Therefore

, a balance between private and government control may be the most prudent approach for the betterment of

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society.