In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railways for very fast train between cities. other belive the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. discuss both these views and give your own opinion
There are various types of
transportation
a city
can have, it can be in the form of land, water, and air transportation
. In regards with
land Change preposition
to
transportation
, some argued
that rapid trains across cities are needed, Wrong verb form
argue
while
the
others believe the budget is better allocated for public Correct article usage
apply
transports
improvement. Change the noun form
transport
This
essay will discuss the underlying reasons to support
both views and find the balance between them.
Transportations
can be a means to Fix the agreement mistake
Transportation
support
the growth of local business
and having those between cities will attract more customers and suppliers. Whoosh, the name of high-speed
train connecting Bandung and Jakarta, Correct article usage
the high-speed
built
with the same purpose. Indeed having fast train do Add a missing verb
was built
support
the business
by enabling customer from Jakarta to come for leisure and eventually increase local income per-capita
. Correct your spelling
per capita
However
, with
poor infrastructure within Change preposition
apply
city
will provide Add an article
the city
a city
unpleasant
Correct article usage
an unpleasant
experience
for the tourist
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tourists
itself
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Thus
, combination
of better Add an article
a combination
the combination
transportation
between cities and within city
is pivotal.
Add an article
the city
a city
On the other hand
, increasing public comfort while
nurturing healthy
environment is the goal of improving current public transport. Looking at the same Correct article usage
a healthy
business
angle, possessing diverse type
and better public Fix the agreement mistake
types
transportations
are necessary to reduce traffic and pollution and boost Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
visitors
Change noun form
visitors'
visitor's
experience
during their stay. For instance
, Puncak has little to none
public transport Correct quantifier usage
no
support
, resulting massive
traffic Change preposition
in massive
jam
, especially during rush hour, which brings down the Fix the agreement mistake
jams
overall
satisfaction of the visit. Maintaining enjoyable
Correct article usage
an enjoyable
experience
Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
together with
improving accessibility will be beneficial for
Change preposition
from
business
perspective.
In conclusion, it is crucial to find Correct article usage
a business
middle
ground between initiatives to improve Add an article
a middle
the middle
transportation
for
within and across Change preposition
apply
city
, as both will cater Add an article
the city
different
purposes. Public transport within Change preposition
to different
city
will Add an article
the city
a city
be improve
with Change the verb form
be improved
aim
Add an article
the aim
an aim
to provide
Change preposition
of providing
better
Add an article
a better
experience
, whilst transportation
across city
using Add an article
the city
Correct article usage
the train
train
will be beneficial for the growth of Fix the agreement mistake
trains
local
Add an article
the local
a local
business
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