The chart below shows the types of communication training taken by employees in an international company and the reasons why they took part in this training.
The given pie charts
illustrates
different kinds of communication training employees took and the reason Change the verb form
illustrate
way
they Correct your spelling
why
choose
to do so in an international company. Wrong verb form
chose
Overall
, most employees went to part-time training in the evening, and least
people went to Correct article usage
the least
distant
learning. Meanwhile, most people went to the Replace the word
distance
trainings
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training
pieces of training
was
because of holiday travel.
To start with, the percentage of part-time training in the evening was the highest among all, which was 39% followed by part-time training Unnecessary verb
apply
in
the weekends and self-tuition, both of which Change preposition
at
was
22%. The figure for Correct subject-verb agreement
were
distant
learning was 12%, and Replace the word
distance
lastly
, the number of intensive training was only 5% which was the lowest.
On the other hand
, 46% employees
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of employees
choose
those training Wrong verb form
chose
due to
holiday travel which was the biggest reason. The figure for business travel, personal interest and other reasons was 17%, 14% and 13%, while
the number of communication with clients was only 10% which was the fewest
.Correct word choice
lowest
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