The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015

The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015
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pie charts illustrate the local government encountered expenses in the
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2010 and 2015.
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, the education sector contributed a significant amount in
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while
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pensions remain a very small amount contribution in the given two
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. In comparison, there are no major changes throughout the
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in the expenditure of the local government but the small number of hikes can be accounted for from the starting
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to end. In
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most of the expenses are provided to education, healthcare, pensions and defence.
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in the
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2010 education and defence were at 24% and 17% respectively and it slightly decreased to 21% and 17% in 2015. But very little difference in healthcare
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for
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which is only 1% down.
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, pensions and other expenses remained the same amount in
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at 19% and 1% respectively. Even, though some expenditures
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increased in recent
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, when looking at welfare was at 8% in the starting
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and rose to 13%
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of the
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.
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, interest on borrowing increased by 5% in the latest period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, both, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • allocation
  • budget
  • fiscal
  • increased/decreased spending
  • percentage
  • funding
  • infrastructure
  • public services
  • education
  • healthcare
  • recreation
  • welfare
  • economic conditions
  • fiscal policy
  • trend
  • analysis
  • comparative
  • significant
  • allocate
  • reallocate
  • subsidize
  • cutbacks
  • deficit
  • surplus
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