The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing house work in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The chart illustrates the usage of electronic technology and how much time doing homework in
household
in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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households
Overall
,it can seen that,in the started time the use
of machines was low percentage but day to day at
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it
was
increased and in the early decades people Verb problem
has
work
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worked
with
themselves Change preposition
by
instead
of machines.
To begin
with,in 1920 the use
of refrigerators was zero and it was
sharply went up Unnecessary verb
apply
at
52% in 1940 Change preposition
to
moreover
,it was
consistently increased and reached Unnecessary verb
apply
at
90% in 1960.During the 1980 to 2000 used 100%.
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apply
Furthermore
,the
work with electronics was Correct article usage
apply
commonly
in Change the word
common
the
houses and Correct article usage
apply
use
of vacuum Correct article usage
the use
cleaner
and washing Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
machine
30%,40% in 1920,it was slightly increased in 1940 Fix the agreement mistake
machines
at
50%,Change preposition
to
60
% but Correct word choice
and 60
1980
the Change preposition
by 1980
use
of washing machine minimum decreased and in 2019 71% in end
of the period Add an article
the end
although
,the vacuum cleaner used during the six years period increased and reached at 100% in 2019.
On the other hand
, the number of hours
of housework in 1920 almost 50 hours
per week it was top of the list in this
year after that it was declined in 1940 approximately
30 Change preposition
to approximately
hours
and in 2019 lowest ratio around 10 hours
per week .Submitted by rs55169611 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words use, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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