The graph shows student enrolments at the University of Westchester.
The given bar chart illustrates student
admission
at the University of Westchester from 1875 to 2024.Units are measured in thousands of students
Overall
, all trends demonstrated positive growth over the period
in question, although
at different rates.
In more detail, male students
’ growth started at just below 1000 admission
between 1875 and 1899.The following 75 years saw a swell to roughly 12000 Fix the agreement mistake
admissions
students
. Since 1974 the figure for male students
reached the peak of 14000 students
, before falling slightly to just about 14000 students
in 2020-2024.The percentage of female students
equalled approximately 750 students
from 1900 to 1924, then
it started to go up sharply to more than 4000 students
at the end
of the period
.
Regarding the index of admission
at the age over 25 years made up on the same level as female students
( around 750 students
), then
it demonstrated a dramatic rise to just over 10000 students
at the end
of the period
.Foreign students
began to study at this
university in 1950-1974 and the figure was just below 4000 admission
, Change to a plural noun
admissions
however
, it showed a jump to almost 10000 enlistment
Change to a plural noun
enlistments
at the end
of the period
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