the graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who went to the UK for different purpose between 1989 and 2009

The given line graph illustrates the people who

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visited to United Kingdom for three different reasons from 1889 to 2009.

Overall

,

amoung

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among

holiday

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, business and meeting friends and relatives, vacation was the highest number of visitors recorded and it remained high throughout the years.

In contrast

, the least purpose of the visit was the

meeting

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beloved

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ones.

Also

, another reason was the business

gradully

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increased in the given period of time. In the year

of

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1989, vacation was at around 6.5

million

and it remained constant for

following

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few years. At the same time minimum number of people arrived

for getting

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along with

their loved ones and it was at 3.5

million

.

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, the purpose of business

reason

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reasons

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suddenly dropped from 5

million

to 4

million

at the

begining

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beginning

of the period. But it rose with fluctuation throughout the years up to 8

million

. When looking at

tourist

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tourists

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who arrived for leisure dramatically

increaed

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increased

to peak amount in the year 2000.

However

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it suddenly dropped to

nealy

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nearly

6

million

in 2004. But it rose again steadily at peak

at the end

of the year.