WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactoryjob or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is considered by
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some
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that accepting
bad
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situation
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is the best way to deal with
this
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problems
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,
while
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other
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who think
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try
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and
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enhance
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situations
is
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better
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way than accepting. In my opinion, I
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that
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for
bad
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a bad
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situation has advantages for current times,
while
trying and improving more useful for
future
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. On the one hand,
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bad events
have
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advantages in some cases. Having unexpected bad events can cause devastating consequences that
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attention
such
as personal economic crises. If a person who has a problem like that
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the problem, he/she will think and try the create
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for
this
problem immediately. On the one hand, trying and improving when facing
the
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those
kind
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of
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problems
have advantages for the
future
because solutions for the
future
require more effort and experimentation. Another advantage of working and trying harder in
such
situations
will be to avoid encountering
such
situations
in the
future
.
Finally
, In my
oponion
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opinion
, whether
accepting
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bad
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situation or try and enhance
situations
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depends on the is it for the
future
or for the present. To
given
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an example,
while
accepting is an advantage money
problems
or relationship
problems
, in other
situations
such
as academic life or career is
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advantages
advantageous
to try and improve
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coherence cohesion
The overall structure of the essay is weak. Introduction and conclusion should clearly present the topic and summarize the main points. Logical structure and paragraph division need improvement. Focus on creating distinct paragraphs, each with a clear main idea, and use cohesive devices to link these ideas smoothly.
task achievement
The essay lacks a clear and complete response to the task. The introduction does not effectively paraphrase the prompt or outline the essay's structure. A clear opinion is not presented, and examples provided are not fully developed. The conclusion is absent, depriving the essay of closure. Work on developing ideas more fully, presenting balanced views, and concluding effectively.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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