Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

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issue nowadays that

people

are living without knowing the

people

around them. Because of the technology

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developer

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developers

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the

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time

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world

make the insensitive personality increases in each person.

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, it

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to be changed now by reducing the addiction to the

Internet

. It can be recognised that the

world

is becoming more and more developing

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people

have to catch up with them by using

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for reaching

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the news immediately

due to

that the number of users using the

Internet

nowadays has reached

at

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over 80%.

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everyone will depend on their technological devices

such

as

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,

TV

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,

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and phone

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phone

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phones

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. They can not leave without the

phone

or

dosomething

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do something

something

without it. Not stop at that, the children are

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too. In some cases, during their meal family. They will be using

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phone

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and do not care about the

people

around them.

This

will make them become more insensitive

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others.

However

,

ther

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there

are solutions for

this

problem. The parents should be more strict with their children. Restrict the

time

they can use the

Internet

. Let them and their children join more outdoor activities in the

neighbours

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so that they can learn more and know about the

world

around them. Spend more

time

on

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family and friends than the

Internet

.

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can make life

skill

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better. Reduce the

time

using the

Internet

so that we can prevent the addiction to

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mobile

phone

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and dependence on them. The government should encourage the citizens to go out and take part in the events so that in

there

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area

people

will get on well with others. In conclusion, the

world

is more developing so that we

can not

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not have

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problems

about

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knowing the

people

around us. We just can decrease it and make it better so that we

should

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persuade

people

around us not to get into

this

problem.