The diagram shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whrere relevant.

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The diagram illustrates how

plastic

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bottles

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are recycled and

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used again in a cycle.

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, the process of recycling used

plastic

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bottles

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consists of 9 stages,

begining

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beginning

with people putting away

plastic

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bottles

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into recycling

bin

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, and ending up with producing end products.

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begining

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, people throw away recyclable trash

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plastic

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bottles

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into specific bins.

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the

plastic

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bottles

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are collected and

transfered

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transferred

by recycling trucks. In the next stage, at the Recycling

centre

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, collected material is sorted by hand.

Sequently

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Consequently

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are compressed into blocks,

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the blocks are crushed into a container.After which, shredded plastics are washed in the container.

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shredded plastics undergo a machine, and

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pellets are made. Following by, pellets are heated.

Raw

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material is formed

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of heating pellets.

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, raw materials are sorted

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and

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sent to factories. Factories produce final products

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plastic

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bottles

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and

plastic

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bags from the raw material. At

last

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, consumers throw away used products into recycling bins and

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cycle continues .

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

172 words

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The diagram shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whrere relevant.

Everyone should consider becoming a vegetarian as consuming meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later, you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain what the problem is suggest how it can be fixed say what you would like the landlord to do about it.

The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

Government in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on food and beverages with high level of sugar some think that these taxes are a good idea while other disagree. Discuss both you and give your opinion?

Some people believe that universities should only offer places to students with high marks, while others believe that people of all ages should be allowed even if they don’t do well in school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.