The diagram shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whrere relevant.
The diagram illustrates how
plastic
bottles
are recycled and being
used again in a cycle.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Overall
, the process of recycling used plastic
bottles
consists of 9 stages, begining
with people putting away Correct your spelling
beginning
plastic
bottles
into recycling bin
, and ending up with producing end products.
Fix the agreement mistake
bins
At
the Change preposition
In
begining
, people throw away recyclable trash Correct your spelling
beginning
such
as plastic
bottles
into specific bins. Next
the Add a comma
Next,
plastic
bottles
are collected and transfered
by recycling trucks. In the next stage, at the Recycling Correct your spelling
transferred
centre
, collected material is sorted by hand. Capitalize word
Centre
Sequently
, Correct your spelling
Consequently
bottles
are compressed into blocks, then
the blocks are crushed into a container.After which, shredded plastics are washed in the container.
Next,
shredded plastics undergo a machine, and plastic
pellets are made. Following by, pellets are heated. Raw
material is formed Add an article
The raw
as a result
of heating pellets. Then
, raw materials are sorted,
and Remove the comma
apply
are
sent to factories. Factories produce final products Unnecessary verb
apply
such
as plastic
bottles
and plastic
bags from the raw material. At last
, consumers throw away used products into recycling bins and this
cycle continues .Submitted by mohsen.pn1998 on
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