In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outhweighs the disadvantages ?
Due to
the recent advancements in technology and especially A.I
, in the future all Correct your spelling
AI
cars
and public transportations
will not need a human to drive, Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
instead
they will be driven by computers and Add a comma
instead,
the
Artificial Intelligence. I believe disadvantages like high price and Correct article usage
apply
people
's mistrust in these vehicles does
not outweigh advantages Change the verb form
do
such
as safer roads
and less traffic.
On one hand, producing these motors and persuading people
to buy them, is an expensive process, and it will take time to be accomplished. For example
, Tesla is manufacturing electric cars
with autopilot option
, which when enabled, the car will drive automatically afterwards. Fix the agreement mistake
options
However
, these cars
cost more than normal cars
. In addition
, A.I
is a new technology and Correct pronoun usage
It
people
find it hard to trust it, and it's psychological
fact that as human beings we tend to trust experienced persons (Correct article usage
a psychological
such
as drivers) who make mistakes sometimes, rather than computers .
On the other hand
, It is a well known
fact that computers perform tasks more Add a hyphen
well-known
accurate
than Change the word
accurately
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the human's
human's
mind, and Change noun form
human
this
means computer-based vehicles are less likely to make faults and cause accidents. This
indicates that roads
with smart cars
are significantly safer. In addition
, if auto-driven cars
become popular and common, the amount
of personal Change the quantifier
number
cars
in
the Change preposition
on
roads
will decrease, and this
results
in less busy Wrong verb form
will result
roads
. In my opinion
these benefits are extremely notable and can't be ignored.
In conclusion, in the coming Add a comma
opinion,
years
we will have streets filled with automatic Add a comma
years,
cars
and trucks with A.I as driver
. I believe the increase in Add an article
a driver
the driver
safety
of Correct article usage
the safety
roads
and lighter traffics
, make Change the verb form
traffic
this
matter more beneficiary
and we can ignore disadvantages Correct your spelling
beneficial
such
as high costs and mistrust of people
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