In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outhweighs the disadvantages ?

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the recent advancements in technology and especially

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, in the future all

cars

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and public

transportations

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will not need a human to drive,

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instead

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they will be driven by computers and

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Artificial Intelligence. I believe disadvantages like high price and

people

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's mistrust in these vehicles

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not outweigh advantages

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as safer

roads

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and less traffic. On one hand, producing these motors and persuading

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to buy them, is an expensive process, and it will take time to be accomplished.

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, Tesla is manufacturing electric

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with autopilot

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, which when enabled, the car will drive automatically afterwards.

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, these

cars

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cost more than normal

cars

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is a new technology and

people

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find it hard to trust it, and it's

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fact that as human beings we tend to trust experienced persons (

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as drivers) who make mistakes sometimes, rather than computers .

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fact that computers perform tasks more

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mind, and

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means computer-based vehicles are less likely to make faults and cause accidents.

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indicates that

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with smart

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are significantly safer.

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, if auto-driven

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become popular and common, the

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of personal

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the

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will decrease, and

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in less busy

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these benefits are extremely notable and can't be ignored. In conclusion, in the coming

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we will have streets filled with automatic

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and trucks with A.I as

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a driver

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. I believe the increase in

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the safety

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roads

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and lighter

traffics

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, make

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matter more

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and we can ignore disadvantages

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as high costs and mistrust of

people

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