In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outhweighs the disadvantages ?

Due to
the recent advancements in technology and especially
A.I
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AI
, in the future all
cars
and public
transportations
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will not need a human to drive,
instead
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instead,
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they will be driven by computers and
the
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Artificial Intelligence. I believe disadvantages like high price and
people
's mistrust in these vehicles
does
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not outweigh advantages
such
as safer
roads
and less traffic. On one hand, producing these motors and persuading
people
to buy them, is an expensive process, and it will take time to be accomplished.
For example
, Tesla is manufacturing electric
cars
with autopilot
option
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, which when enabled, the car will drive automatically afterwards.
However
, these
cars
cost more than normal
cars
.
In addition
, A.
I
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is a new technology and
people
find it hard to trust it, and it's
psychological
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fact that as human beings we tend to trust experienced persons (
such
as drivers) who make mistakes sometimes, rather than computers .
On the other hand
, It is a
well known
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fact that computers perform tasks more
accurate
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than
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the human's
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human's
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mind, and
this
means computer-based vehicles are less likely to make faults and cause accidents.
This
indicates that
roads
with smart
cars
are significantly safer.
In addition
, if auto-driven
cars
become popular and common, the
amount
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of personal
cars
in
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the
roads
will decrease, and
this
results
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in less busy
roads
. In my
opinion
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opinion,
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these benefits are extremely notable and can't be ignored. In conclusion, in the coming
years
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we will have streets filled with automatic
cars
and trucks with A.I as
driver
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a driver
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. I believe the increase in
safety
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of
roads
and lighter
traffics
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, make
this
matter more
beneficiary
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beneficial
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and we can ignore disadvantages
such
as high costs and mistrust of
people
.
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