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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2020

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2020
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The table above shows the
expenditure
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 on
food
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, tobacco, clothing, education, and leisure in five different
countries
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. Turkey spends the highest percentage on
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, drinks, and cigarettes, accounting for approximately 32
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percent
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 of the total
expenditure
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 which is more than any other country. Ireland ranks second with almost
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percent
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 share of spending on
food
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, drinks, and smoking. The contribution of consumption spending on
food
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, drinks, and smoking in Sweden, Italy, and Spain is between 16 to 19 per cent. Italy has a significant share of 9
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percent
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 in the clothing category,
whereas
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 all other
countries
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 spend less than 7
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percent
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 in
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 area. Leisure and education
expenditure
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is
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 much less than other categories in all
countries
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, with Spain spending the least among all five
countries
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, accounting for nearly 2
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percent
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 of the total
expenditure
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.
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, Turkey spends 4.3
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percent
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 of its total
expenditure
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 on leisure and education.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure, food, countries, percent with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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