The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram shows how a central heating
system
of a house
works. As is observed from the illustration, the central heating machine comprises several mechanical aspects and forms a complex system
.
According to
the given illustration, for the central heating machine to work the cold water
supply is required and this
water
flows to the storage tank and the overflow pipe is there to store the excess water
in storage. The water
is passed through a boiler which is either gas or oil driven and a pump is connected with it. The radiators are connected with the boiler and these radiators are made of small tubes. When the cold water
passes through the pump and boiler, it gains temperature and becomes hot water
and from the water
taps, the house
members get hot water
. Thus
the whole system
that covers the house
keeps it warm.
In summary, the central heating system
mainly works by flowing water
through the house
and increasing the temperature of it.Submitted by addaragelal on
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