People these days buy things that they do not even need. Why do you think people buy unwanted things? Will this have a positive or negative effect on individual and society? What do you think?

Nowadays,

people

purchase unnecessary

things

as they

are attempting

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to imitate

the

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other

individuals

or

celebrities

who share their lavish lives on social media. In my aspect,

this

certainly

have

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a bad impact on both individual and

society

. There are reasons to support the claim.

To begin

with, some

individuals

try to buy the

things

that are not necessary as they think that they would level themselves up in

the

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society

. It,

therefore

, means that

people

are purchasing unwanted

things

which

deriorate

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deteriorate

deteriorated

society

as the life standard will be set wrongly.

Additionally

, it has bad impacts on the

individuals

as they will not have enough

money

for buying

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to buy

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necessary

things

.

For example

, they are ill, but they do not have

money

for the treatment as they already wasted the

money

with

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unnecessary stuff.

In addition

,

this

issue

deriorates

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deteriorates

deteriorated

after mobile phones

is

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introduced

to

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people

's life. Nowadays,

people

especially the young ones tend to spend a lot of time on social media.

Thus

, they can clearly see the

celebrities

' lavish lives purchasing pricey

things

.

Therefore

, they attempt to imitate the

celebrities

.

This

causes

people

to spend their

money

more on

those

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expensive

things

rather than saving it which definitely

have

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has

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a bad impact on

people

. To summarize,

people

are now wasting their

money

on unnecessary

things

due to

imitating

celebrities

and wrong

mind

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mindsets

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set

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which definitely have bad impacts on

society

and

individuals

such

as

decrease

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a decrease

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in

purchasing

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the purchasing

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power of

people

.