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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The use of English as a global language will continue to have a lot of issues. Some think it will be easier to converse with the public in any part of the world. Meanwhile, some people disagree with
this
 statement. In my essay, I will give some reasons why it will be better. Nowadays, tourism is increasing and has a big population in our life. In that case, it will be better if you will know a language other than your native. It will give you a chance to communicate with individuals from
this
 place.
For example
, scientists found that people who used translators in their time of journey to other cultures accounted for 85% in 2010. It will be a big problem in lands where internet connections are bad or if their phones are not charged.
On the other hand
, it will be hard to learn languages any time when you go to other countries.
Therefore
, we need to choose one language like a second native one for conversation in other places. Even if English will not have effects global, they are already used in many countries as a second native and taught in schools and universities.
Such
 as, in France, Netherlands, Kazakhstan, Russia and in other ones.
To sum up
, all mentioned , I come to the conclusion that I agree with the statement that it will be better globalised English.
Hence
, it will have more benefits than the issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • lingua franca
  • communication
  • employment opportunities
  • economic growth
  • cultural exchange
  • knowledge sharing
  • education
  • travel
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural imperialism
  • linguistic imperialism
  • colonization
  • identity
  • language preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • mutual understanding
  • intercultural relationships
  • linguistic barriers
  • disadvantaged communities
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