Plastic bags,bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

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everyone
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bags
to carry
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things
.
plastic
bags
,bottles and packaging are affected our environment.
although
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,
use
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the use
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of
plastic
bags
and bottles
cause
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the
deseas
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disease
and
also
spread
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the
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air pollution, the
government
should take action to recycle
this kind
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.I will discuss both points and
also
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my point of view in the forthcoming paragraph.
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with,
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use
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things
which
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made of
plastic
that
easy
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to carry items but
wo
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we
do not know that it can bad impact
for
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our environment.
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,when we
use
plastic
containers and
plastic
bags
,we throw
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without any hesitation
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cause
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pollution.Many
Europe
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countries even every person in these countries
lookafter
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after
themselves but in Pakistan,particularly we would talk about the big city Karachi very polluted city and everywhere can see you garbage that
mostly
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made of
plastic
things
cause
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air pollution
moreover
,air
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our health that reason of serious deseas asthma and
also
cancer which is damage our lungs.To illustrate,we should avoid
to
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use
plastic
bags
and bottles and if we have to
used
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these equipment
then
we dispose carefully.
Furthermore
,the
government
should solve
this
problem because it is necessary for our society.To cite an example,the
government
should make
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strict rules that
everyone
throw
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this
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things
in the dustbin and after that one of the
method
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of recycling,it tend to spread our society and people aware
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concept
such
as many countries utilise these
things
.The community should
also
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in
this
enigma
everyone
put
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their role
then
our problem
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very quickly.
To conclude
,
everyone
should avoid
to
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use
plastic
bags
,the
government
should
aware
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the society that they implement
the
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disposal system and
also
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recycling system.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • wildlife
  • marine life
  • decompose
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • fossil fuels
  • waterways
  • flooding
  • soil
  • groundwater
  • government regulations
  • single-use plastics
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • plastic consumption
  • recycle
  • dispose of
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