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The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart displays the number of British
people
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 who emigrated to Australia, Spain, New Zealand, France, and the USA over the
period
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 2004 to 2007. It can be seen that during the presented
period
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, Australia has always been the most chosen destination. Emigration stood at just over 40.000
people
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 in 2004, which was twice as high as New Zealand, the USA, and France. Apart from a jump to approximately 52.000 in 2006, it remained around
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 level throughout the four years. The next most popular country for British migrants to move to was Spain, with approximately 6000
people
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 under Australia during the first 3 years, and a final decline to just below 30000 in 2007. Despite
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 fall, the figure was still higher than for the remaining three countries. New Zealand welcomed around 20000 Britons each year,
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 in the USA the number fluctuated between 20000 and 25000
people
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 over the given
period
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.
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 British emigration happened the least in France, there was a notable peak of more than 30000 migrants in 2005, a similar amount to Spain's. 
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,
at the end
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 of the
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, it was still the least chosen to emigrate, at slightly below 20000
people
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.
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