The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.
The table reveals the results of a survey which involves the views of male and female
members
of a sport
Change the noun form
sports
club
about its opening hours and facilities.
It is clear that
most of women
of the Add an article
the women
club
are not satisfied with the range of activities.
The proportion of satisfaction with the variety of club
activities of male members
accounted for about 55%. In contrast
, female members
of a fitness centre constituted nearly 30% of satisfaction with the range of pastime
compared to only 5% of negative feedback from men. Fix the agreement mistake
pastimes
Furthermore
, the genders were more in agreement about the club
facilities .
In addition
, most women
gave positive feedback for opening hours (approximately 72%), while
the percentage of satisfaction of male members
of the club
constituted 44%. By contrast
, only 3% of women
were unhappy, whereas
nearly 40% of the men expressed their dissatisfaction.Furthermore
, 25% and 19% of positive feedback about opening hours were given by women
and men respectively.Submitted by nuraiorynbassar07 on
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