The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart depicts data regarding tourists visiting various galleries in the year 2011. There are six museums described in the graph, starting with the Louvre in France, the Metropolitan Museum
in the United States of America, the British Museum
in the United Kingdom, the National Museum
of Korea, the Museo del Prado in Spain, and the State Hermitage in Russia. In general, every single one of the countries here are
from the global north.
Beginning with the highest number, the Louvre tops the chart as the most visited Change the verb form
is
museum
with approximately nine million
visitors, according to
the bar infographic. Continuing to the second highest, there is the Metropolitan Museum
with a number of six million
attendees. Then
, comes the British Museum
with slightly lower
than six Correct word choice
fewer
million
art enthusiasts. After that, there are the National Museum
of Korea, Museo del Prado, and State Hermitage with around three million
comers. Also
, as shown in the bar chart, people in western
countries go to art galleries more than in Capitalize word
Western
eastern
countries.Capitalize word
Eastern
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