The diagram shows differences in temperature zones between tropical mountains and temperate mountains Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows differences in temperature zones between tropical mountains and temperate mountains

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates temperate and tropical mountains and their big differences.
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, the tropical mountain is higher than the temperate hill approximately 2 times. Meanwhile, temperate do not have a temperature
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and warm
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, which causes their low high. The temperature
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and warm
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together count a little up to 1500 meters which is 6000 feet. The cool
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of both uphill is nearly have same tall and accounts for 5000 feet or about 1250 meters. At that time difference between forests of 2 rocks was big. When the temperate is 1000 feet big, the tropical has 4000. The first and
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time when temperate has a case where they calculate more than the second upland is the alpine meadow. They have diversity by 2 times.
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, the permanent snow on these hills has one of the biggest dissensions that has a number of 1000 meters which is more than 5 times than in other rocks.
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