The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the 

information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where 

relevant.
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The chart illustrates the figures for people who visited art museums in six different countries namely, France, America, The United Kingdom, Spain, Korea, and Russia in 2011. It is conspicuous that the Louvre
museum
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is the most popular
while
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the National
Museum
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of Korea, Museo del Prado, and State Hermitage were less explored by tourists compared to others. On the one hand, a
museum
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called the Louvre which is located in France had nearly nine
million
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visits which far exceeded others. Followed by, the American Metropolitan
Museum
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is second place accounting for 6
million
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people
In contrast
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, doubled the number of tourists visiting Spain's art gallery called Museo del Prado, with 3
million
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.
Moreover
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, the figures from the State Heritage and National
Museum
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of Korea were under 3
million
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and over 3
million
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, respectively.
Lastly
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, the number of people going to the British
Museum
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was around 6
million
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • visitor numbers
  • fluctuations
  • peak season
  • off-peak season
  • trend
  • visitor demographics
  • attendance
  • special exhibition
  • promotional campaign
  • footfall
  • gallery capacity
  • cultural attraction
  • art enthusiasts
  • exhibit
  • statistical comparison
  • tourist attraction
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