The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018

The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018
The given graph represents the
number
of
stores
that closed and were recently established in one country, from 2011 to 2018. As a whole, the
number
of
openings
reached a peak in 2011, and gradually, it decreased in 2018.
On the contrary
, the amounts of closures reached a higher place than
openings
in 2018, with more than 6000 shops.
In addition
, both categories had fluctuating trends.
According to
the data, there were more than 8000
openings
in 2011 which fell sharply to 4000 in the next year. Again,
this
number
rose steadily through the years and reached almost 6000
stores
in 2014.
Then
,
this
cluster dropped and reached an equal amount in 2012. During the next couple of years, the trend was steady.
Finally
, in 2018, it had another low with only 3000
openings
. Moving on to another group, the
number
of closures was around 6000 and rose slightly till 2013. Surprisingly, there was a huge drop in 2015, and reached its lowest point with only 500 closed
stores
.
Nevertheless
, it rose dramatically in 2016 and reached 5000
stores
and stayed steady during the rest.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, stores, openings with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 6 times.
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