The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
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The graph illustrates the information about
water
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that was used in agriculture, industrial and domestic,
while
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the table presents
water
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consumption
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in
Brazil
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and
Congo
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in 2000.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
consumption
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of each sector increased over the period given.
Moreover
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,
Brazil
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consumed more
water
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than
Congo
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. At the beginning of the year, agriculture used around 500km3 of
water
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, which was the highest.
By contrast
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, industrial and domestic only used almost one of ten in 1900. By 2000, agriculture still consumed the most which accounted for just under 3,000km3. In the case of industrial and domestic,
water
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consumption
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went up slightly to roughly 1,300km3 and 500km3 respectively. Regarding
Brazil
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,
water
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consumption
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was 359m3 per person which almost tripled
in contrast
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to the
consumption
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of
Congo
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. As for the irrigated land,
Brazil
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had 265 times more than
Congo
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. With regards to the population,
Brazil
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had 176 million people,
whereas
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Congo
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had only 5.2 million people.
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