The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.

The maps illustrate the changes that occurred in Lynwich

College

from the year 2006 up to the present.

Overall

, the school has greatly improved in terms of its amenities. It is noticeable that a number of buildings were constructed now compared to its 2006 site. One major development in Lynwich

College

was the construction of the cafeteria. The path that used to be connecting the

college

building 1 and 2 was demolished to give way to the canteen. The trees at the corner of the

college

buildings were cut down and replaced by a library.

In addition

, a bus stop is now available within the school perimeter to allow convenient and safe transportation for students. Looking closely at the details, the cafeteria is linked to all other amenities on the campus

such

as the exit road and bus stop. One path leads to the car park which

then

leads to a bike storage site. Next to the car park is the old location for the library, it is now where the sports centre is located and right next to it is the sports field. The only areas that remained untouched were the two school buildings and the sports field.

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