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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates, the percentages of
communitys
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communities
community
 over 65 and above age in three different
countiries
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countries
(
USA
,
SWEDEN
, JAPAN) in the year
of
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1940 to 2040.
Overall
, it is
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conspicuous
 that all the countries follow an upward trend. in
the
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1940, In
USA
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the USA
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 it
starts
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 from only around 9% and slightly
increses
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increases
increased
 to 10 percent
in1960
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in 1960
whereas
, in
Sweden
 the percentage was around 7% in 1940 with a slow growth to 9%
in1960
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in 1960
. In
Sweden
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 and hit a high of 25% in 2040. From 1980 to 2020 at
USA
it
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remain
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 stable
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 15%
furthermore
, it reached a peak of around 23% in 2040.
on the other hand
, Japan started from around 5% in 1940 which is twice less
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then
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USA
.
Untill
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Until
 1990 it shows a downward trend to just 3%
apptoximately
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approximately
. It dramatically
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climbed
claimed
 up to 25% in the year
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2030 and, reached around 27
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in2040
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in 2040
 which the highest number of old folks compare to
USA
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the USA
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 and
SWEDEN
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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