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development,
thus
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a better place to live in. Those progress are in regard to the growth of
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science
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. In
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aim for one’s advantages.
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sector which
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to save many lives in the future. Take for
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example are renewable energy generation
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fossil fuel supply which categorized as a limited resource and has a bad impact
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. With the spread of
this
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also
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on
electricity sources.
Thus
, continuing the spirit, a branch of knowledge should aim for
such
practical innovation which has proven beneficial for many
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and in the future.
The development of
science
can
also
be misused
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some
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advantage and victory. The prime example
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this
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later enhanced by Oppen Heimmer to create an explosive bomb called nuclear
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used for
people
in Japan especially
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in Nagasaki and Hiroshima.
Therefore
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science
is mainly for humanity but
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be misused by some
people
in order to seek for own advantage.
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also
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who
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science
only for their own advantage.
it
the idea that
science
should serve humanity before anything else.