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Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #students #schools #children #skills #adult #life
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It is believed that
students
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 should
study
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single-
sex
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schools
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 to function better academically,
however
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, I agree with
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 viewpoint that it would be better for pupils to
study
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 in mixed
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school
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. It is true that there are several benefits for
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 to
study
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single-
sex
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schools
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. Studying in
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 kind of
schoold
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school
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 causes
students
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 to concentrate on the courses and learning. They would not be distracted by some gender issues.
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, my high
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 was a single-
sex
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school
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 , and
i
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 had
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 chances to talk with boys at that time ,But I didn't feel anything wrong about it,
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instead
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 I felt quite comfortable
to get
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along with
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 my classmates.
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, I could spend most of
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 time focusing only on my
study
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 and hobbies.
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,I did not experience gender problems in single-
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schools
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. Separating pupils in single-
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schools
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 prevents some gender issues,
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 as
sex
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 harassment or conflicts between them, which would deter
students
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 from focusing on their studies.
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, I believe that it is beneficial to
students
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 if they opt for studying in mixed
schools
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. The significant reason is that they have the
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 to learn how to get
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 the opposite
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.The way of thinking between
male
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 and
female
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females
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 is totally different, and if youngsters
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 not aware of the differences in
schools
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, it might cause them lots of conflicts and problems between different genders in the future.
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, if boys do not learn how to behave
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girls or vice-versa, they might feel shy or nervous if they want to talk to the opposite
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 attracted them after they
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schools
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, and It would be hard for them to know what kinds of words they could say and what kinds of things they should not say as well.Choosing to
study
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 in
mix
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schools
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 could assist
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young people to
comprehen
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comprehend
 the meaning of consideration and friendliness with the opposite
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. In conclusion,
although
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 some people believe that it would be better for
students
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 to
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 in single-
sex
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schools
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, I believe that getting
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 the opposite
sex
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 is a lifelong lesson, and
students
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 should learn
this
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 paramount life experience in the mixed
school
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.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • minimize distractions
  • gender-related learning styles
  • tailored learning environment
  • sense of empowerment
  • underrepresented
  • bridge the gender gap
  • emulate real-world environments
  • promoting interactions
  • communicate and collaborate
  • break down gender stereotypes
  • mutual respect
  • inclusivity
  • well-rounded individuals
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