The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular building has changed over time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The plans below
illistartes
Correct your spelling
illustrate
us
the exchanges of buildings Change preposition
to us
graund
Correct your spelling
ground
floor
Fix the agreement mistake
floors
during
43 years.
The office had more rooms and more available facilities than Change preposition
over
other
one. Meanwhile, Correct article usage
the other
Flower
shop had nearly 2 times Correct article usage
the Flower
less
rooms.
Change the quantifier
fewer
Only
Correct article usage
The only
things
that Fix the agreement mistake
thing
do
not change after so long time is Correct subject-verb agreement
does
kitchen
. In all Add an article
the kitchen
buildings
it stayed in Add a comma
buildings,
same
place. In 1958 when it was Change the article
the same
office
area, after Correct article usage
an office
walked
Wrong verb form
walking
in
Change preposition
into
house
, there Add an article
the house
is
offices Wrong verb form
were
to
Change preposition
for
secretary
, manager, and Correct article usage
a secretary
assistanse
. Correct your spelling
assistant
Also
on
the right corner was Change preposition
in
reception
area and in the left
top corner was Add an article
the reception
meeting
room. In 1985 they were changed Add an article
the meeting
like
Change preposition
into
a
apartment. There Change the article
an
was
2 bedrooms and Change the verb form
were
living
room. Correct article usage
a living
Furtermore
, they had huge Correct your spelling
Furthermore
bathroom
and Fix the agreement mistake
bathrooms
shower
place. Flower Fix the agreement mistake
showers
shop
that suitable in the present have the biggest changes. In the left corner Fix the agreement mistake
shops
gifts
cards and under them is Change the noun form
gift
play
area. Just below the right under, office for Add an article
a play
the play
shops
staff. Fix the agreement mistake
shop
Therefore
, all other floor
Fix the agreement mistake
floors
giving
Add a missing verb
are giving
for
Change preposition
apply
flower
.Fix the agreement mistake
flowers
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