"The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University.
The table provides data on the reviews of various facilities and services
in
McGill University in the Change preposition
at
years
2005, 2010 and 2015.
Overall
,while
the sporting and societal facilities were awarded same
rating across all Change the article
the same
years
, the range of modules offered were
the least appreciated for all Change the verb form
was
years
.Although
,
the library facilities generated the best reviews in the first five Remove the comma
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years
, the student services soon took over garnereing
the most reviews in the final year.
The University's teaching was the second best in 2005 (74) and third best in 2015(78) in Correct your spelling
garnering
garnered
the
similar manner, the reading infrastructure which was at the top of the league table in 2005 (86) and 2010(88) was the second in 2015 (87). Change the article
a
Although
,
the students seemed to have been neglected in 2005(54) they were soon prioritised and people thought the College performed well in offering Student services in 2015 (97).
All things Sports and Social was said to only deserve the same score of 65 in all Remove the comma
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but the range of modules offered seemed to suffer a steady decline from 39 in 2005 to 25 points in 2015.Submitted by annodunowo on
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