The charts below give information on the age of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The pie charts illustrate the

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age of both Yemen and Italy in 2000 and

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2050.

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the proportion of

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under 14 in Yemen in 2000 was larger than that of Italy, in 2050

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will be decreased in both countries.

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the figures related to Yemen's

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, the under-14-year-old

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will decline from more than 50% (51%) in 2000 to 37% in 2050.

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between 15 and 59

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will experience a slight rise of about 2% (from 3.6% to 5.7%).

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above 60

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contributed to 46.3% of the

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to 57.3% in 2050. With regard to Italy's pie charts the number of

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until 14

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old and between 15 and 59

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old will fall from above14% (14.3%) to 11.5% and from nearly 62% (61.6%) to 46.2% respectively.

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, the share of the elderly

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will have a remarkable growth until 2050.

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Nov 17, 2023

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