the first chart below shows how energy is used in an average australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the first chart below shows how energy is used in an average australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the average domestic
energy
consumption and
greenhouse
gas
emissions
in an Australian household.
Energy
is mainly utilized for heating, water heating, cooling, lighting, refrigeration, and other electrical
appliances
.
Overall
, power is mainly used for heating, and the lowest power is used for cooling purposes.
To begin
with, the ratio between
energy
usage and
greenhouse
emissions
in Australian households were significantly the same;
however
,
gas
emission from cooling, other
appliances
, refrigeration, and lighting was higher than the
energy
used.
In addition
, the highest utilization of power was for heating( 42% ) and,
as a result
of
energy
used,
greenhouse
gas
emission was 10% lower.
Furthermore
, the second highest
energy
was used for water heating (30%), and the
gas
emission was 15%.
On the other hand
,
energy
and
greenhouse
emissions
from cooling, lighting, heating, refrigeration, and other electrical
appliances
remained lower than 30%.
However
, the
gas
emissions
from other
appliances
resulted in 13% more
gas
emissions
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average Australian household
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Energy consumption
  • Activities
  • Heating
  • Cooling
  • Water heating
  • Appliances
  • Lighting
  • Standby
  • Percentage (%)
  • Consumption patterns
  • Efficiency
  • Emissions impact
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy-saving measures
  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Electricity
  • Natural gas
  • Emissions breakdown
  • Energy audit
  • Environmental impact
  • Conservation
  • Mitigation strategies
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