The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart below displays the
number
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of
visitors
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who travelled to a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
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, the total
number
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of
visitors
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increased over time. It is
also
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clear that despite some fluctuations,
visitors
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staying on
island
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the island
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and staying on cruise ships increased over the 7
years
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. The
number
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of
visitors
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who
staid
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stayed
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on cruise ships fluctuated between 0.25
million
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and 0.5
million
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between 2010 and 2013.
Then
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, during the next 4
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years
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years,
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the
number
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of travellers increased steadily, ending the period with 2
million
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individuals staying on cruise ships. 0.75
million
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visitors
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stayed on
island
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the island
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during the first two
years
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,
while
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between 2011 and 2013, the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on
islands
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the islands
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rose significantly to 1.5
million
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and
this
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remained stable in the next three
years
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.
Furthermore
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, there was a decrease in the
number
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of travellers in 2016 to around 1.25
million
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, but it went back to 1.5
million
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in the next year.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, years, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • gradual increase
  • sharp decline
  • steady growth
  • plateau
  • seasonal variation
  • external influences
  • tourist influx
  • sustainable tourism
  • economic impact
  • hospitality industry
  • travel restrictions
  • visitor statistics
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