The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart below displays the
number
of
visitors
who travelled to a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, the total
number
of
visitors
increased over time. It is
also
clear that despite some fluctuations,
visitors
staying on
island
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the island
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and staying on cruise ships increased over the 7
years
. The
number
of
visitors
who
staid
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stayed
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on cruise ships fluctuated between 0.25
million
and 0.5
million
between 2010 and 2013.
Then
, during the next 4
years
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years,
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the
number
of travellers increased steadily, ending the period with 2
million
individuals staying on cruise ships. 0.75
million
visitors
stayed on
island
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the island
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during the first two
years
,
while
between 2011 and 2013, the
number
of
visitors
staying on
islands
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the islands
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rose significantly to 1.5
million
and
this
remained stable in the next three
years
.
Furthermore
, there was a decrease in the
number
of travellers in 2016 to around 1.25
million
, but it went back to 1.5
million
in the next year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, years, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • gradual increase
  • sharp decline
  • steady growth
  • plateau
  • seasonal variation
  • external influences
  • tourist influx
  • sustainable tourism
  • economic impact
  • hospitality industry
  • travel restrictions
  • visitor statistics
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